i danced with laughter last night he is good to me i need to spend more time with him past came calling but i didn't accept the charges he's too moody and sentimental love and i had afternoon tea in a thunderstorm he is essential future rang the bell i peered through the peep hole he smiled at me dream and i have an understanding he is only allowed to visit when he's not a nightmare
Delightfully said. I want what you have here, too. Especially dreams, not nightmares.
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Thanks, Ally😊
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Your second last stanza has a nice positive vibe..
“future rang the bell
i peered through the peep hole
he smiled at me”
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Thanks, Ivor😊
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Aww Sue! Wouldn’t all of us love to have a life like this! Lovely write!😊❤️
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Thanks so much ❤️
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You are welcome. 😊
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Excellent poem, Sue. Well composed, easy to read and relate to, and makes a score for human nature. Well done.
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Love it Sue!
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Thanks so much 😊
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Enthusiastic and approach is delightful to past.🙂
It’s a beautiful poem.
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Thank you😊
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Sue I love this one. Nancy
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Thanks so much, Nancy 🙂
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Lovely poem, Sue, I think I need to dance with laughter, everything has gotten way too serious!
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Thanks so much, Ally😊
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My pleasure, Sue.
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Love the spirit, carpe diem
Seize the moment, even if it is
In a different realm 🙂
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Laughter as a companion. I am scheduling several dates with him this week. I enjoyed your poem Sue.
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Thanks, Ali😊
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How very creative Sue! I love it. Such a great way to share the emotions we all feel.
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So glad you enjoyed it 😊
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yes, very much!
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