
she feigns a laugh before she cries a broken heart with no goodbyes pain and sorrow have burrowed in her lover's eyes, a face gone dim oh, cruel the time, tick-tock, the years deeply etched lines channel her tears an empty vessel, she sets course her sails billow as winds blow north upon life’s ocean, vast and deep fate beckons, no time to weep

Beautiful , sadness yet full of hope at the end .
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So glad you enjoyed it, Any. Thanks for reading 😊
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Pain and beauty merged!!
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Thank you, Salman😊
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Keep it up!!
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😊👍
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Love this, Sue…the resilience…❤️
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Thanks so much😊
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You are welcome. 😊
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Beautiful. The last line is quite evocative. Wistful.
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Thanks for reading, Ally😊
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Wonderful, Sue. I loved the line, “vast and deep faith beckons.
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Thank you.
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Beautiful it captures the sorrow the loss the pain and loneliness. Yet it marks the resilience and fortitude the indomitable spirit to move on . Very strong message.
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Thank you so much for your kind words.😊
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